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Which sentence would be the most engaging opening for a story about a boy who was the sole survivor of a plane crash in the mountains?

A) It was going to be a beautiful day and a perfect day for flying a plane.
B) A boy in a plane had a wreck, and he was the only survivor of the plane wreck.
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C) This is a story about a boy who is in a plane wreck in the mountains and survives.
D) The boy woke up suddenly buried up to his neck in snow and surrounded by burning plane wreckage.

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i would say B because you will want to know what happens next like Oh no whats gonna happen to him but if you want to start it peacefully you should use the order A B C D it sounds good
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I would say D. The boy woke up suddenly buried up to his neck in snow and surrounded by burning plane wreckage.
I hope this helps!!
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User Frederik Aalund
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