PLEASE HELP! 25 points & brilliantiest!
I'm sorry, but the game system I bought last week was a rip-off. It's
really not fair of GameBoxUltra to treat paying customers so badly. I
was really looking forward to using my game system and now I can't. It
really stinks. I am going to tell my friends that the GameBoxUltra 2950
is a piece of junk.
How well does this draft address the audience and purpose of the following
prompt?
Writing prompt:
You recently purchased a new video game console, but now, two
weeks later, one of the controllers has stopped working. Write a letter
to the company asking for a replacement part.
A. The example is weak because it does not cite any credible
sources or include background information,
B. The example is strong because it uses direct language that shows
how upset the customer is and what he wants.
C. The example is strong because it identifies GameBoxUltra as the
guilty party and explains how the author's feelings changed
D. The example is weak because it uses informal language and does
not clearly identify the problem or the desired solution