Question

Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific purpose and audience.

Rewrite this dull sentence to make it dazzling.

Sandra walked across the street. (15 points)

Answer 1

With her hair flowing in the wind and the sparkle in her eyes as bright as the sun, Sandra graciously walked to the other side of the street.

Answer 2

Sandra walked graciously to the other side of the road. (is this dazzling i don't know)