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Which option is the best revision of the sentences?

The soccer player kicked the ball into the goal. His cleats were lime green.
A)The soccer player with lime green cleats kicked the ball into the goal.
B)The soccer player kicked the ball into the goal with lime green cleats.
C) The soccer player kicked with lime green the ball into the goal cleats..
D)The soccer player kicked the ball with lime green cleats into the goal. <-- i think

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The correct answer is A because it is the most clear and concise.

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User Mbdvg
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I believe it is A because you describe the player before his actions

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User Brunorey
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