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Choose the stylistically superior sentence. Her hair was full of soft, feathery snowflakes. Soft flakes like feathers caught in her hair.

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The second sentence ("Soft flakes like feathers caught in her hair.") is stylistically superior.

The second sentence flows better and uses the active voice, instead of the first one, which uses the passive voice.

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User I Make My Mark
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Answer: the correct answer is "soft flakes like feathers caught in her hair".

Explanation: the sentence above is a literary figure called metaphor and it is used in stylistically superior sentences.

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