Question

What is the BEST way to revise this sentence so that it conveys clear, concise ideas and does not change the meaning of the sentence?

Answer 1

Make sure the commas are placed where commas should be placed and the periods are placed where periods should be placed. Too many commas can get confusing and too many periods could mean too many pauses. Find the balance between the two.

Answer 2

fix the quotations or wording