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Read the advertisement.

Mr. Sparkle is a cleaning product. It cleans floors, walls, and countertops without damaging them. It does not cost very much. It is available at supermarkets.
Which revision does the advertisement need?


the omission of unnecessary details


the addition of adjectives and adverbs


the recasting of sentences that are not parallel


the correction of misspelled words

2 Answers

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B. The addition of adjectives and adverbs


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User Jamesk
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The answer would be the addition of adjectives and adverbs.
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