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How would you change the problem in this sentence. You should never jog immediately after eating a big meal. remove the difficult language remove the slang change the second person to third

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User Alapshin
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change the second person to third

This sentence flows better and becomes more universal advice instead of appealing only to the person reading it at the time. If it states "A person should never jog immediately after eating a big meal." the sentence becomes clearer and more open to everyone.
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