Question

Read the paragraph. Salvador Dalí, born Salvador Felipe Jacinto Dalí y Domenech. In Figueras, Spain in 1904. He was a Surrealist painter and printmaker; some of his most notable works explore subconscious imagery. In fact, he was profoundly influenced by the writings of Sigmund Freud. An Austrian neurologist who created psychoanalysis. Which is the best way to improve this paragraph’s sentence fluency?

Answer 1

D. Correct the sentence fragments

Answer 2

D). Correct the sentence fragments.

Step-by-step explanation:

Fluency is one of the crucial elements to deliver the intended idea or thought effectively to the readers.

As per the question, the best way to improve the fluency of the paragraph's sentence would be 'correcting/rectifying the sentence fragments(lacking either a subject, action, etc.)' as these fragments break the flow of the sentence and idea as well that affects the efficacy of the thought and prevents accomplishing its meaning. Thus, the rectification of the fragments would complete the thought and offer a comprehensive meaning to the sentence and the passage. Thus, option D is the correct answer.