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Which revision is needed to correct the following sentence?

The Unicorns know of an evil mad scientist who lives beyond those dark distant mountains.

A. Add a comma after the word distant.
B. Add a comma after the word dark.
C. Add a comma after the word mad.
D. Add a comma after the word evil.

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12 votes

Answer:

B

Step-by-step explanation:

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User Zamboni
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Answer:

b

Step-by-step explanation:

The Unicorns know of an evil mad scientist who lives beyond those dark, distant mountains.

two adjectives together need a comma.

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User Mamaj
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