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We walked to the wall. We played for a while. We went home.

Choose the revision which retains the meaning of the above sentences while using helpful transition words and phrases and maintaining coherence.

A) We walked to the wall, played for a while, and then we went home.
B) We walked to the wall, but we played for a while, during which we went home.
C) We walked to the wall, and played for a while, contrary to which we went home.
D) We walked to the wall, and we went home, but before that we played for a while.

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User Mourinho
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Answer:

A) We walked to the wall, played for a while, and then we went home.

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User Fargath
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Answer:

The answer is choice A.

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