alright :). i will definitely help but writing the whole essay for you wont help you for next time so here are some tips and ideas.
first of all since this is PERSUASIVE that means no “i think” of “i believe” because you need to convince the reader.
second, there are tons of apps and websites such as grammarly so you don’t have to be very good at english.
and finally i like to reword my sentences sometimes if i need lots of words and can’t think of anything to write. wish you luck!!! get an A!!