Rewrite the following sentences using vivid adjectives and avoiding slang and nonstandard English. The horse ran fast as the other horses ran fast, too.

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Pithhelmet · Answer 1 · 2020-09-24T19:29:42+0000

The horse ran just as fast as the other horses.

There were a lot of extra words in the original. I got rid of duplicate words and the word “too.” I added the word “just” to make the sentence flow smoother.

Rewrite the following sentences using vivid adjectives and avoiding slang and nonstandard English. The horse ran fast as the other horses ran fast, too.

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