Question

Revise the sentence below in order to make them appropriate for an academic text.

The patient's not gonna see the doctor if he doesn't hightail to the hospital on time.

Answer 1

The patient's, not going see the doctor if he doesn't make it to the hospital on time.

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Answer 2

The patient is not going to see the doctor, if he does not go to the hospital on time.

Step-by-step explanation:

academic texts often use a formal voice, which means that you need to get rid of the apostrophes, do not use slang that much, and finish words instead of cutting them short, like "gonna".