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If someone could read the first part of my essay and give feedback that would be great

If someone could read the first part of my essay and give feedback that would be great
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If someone could read the first part of my essay and give feedback that would be great

If someone could read the first part of my essay and give feedback that would be great-example-1
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I would try not to use the word culture so much. Try to use the words civilization, society, and lifestyle. I hope this help!
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User Jesse Sweetland
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Pretty good! I don’t see any mistakes

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