Question

How can I make this not a run - on sentence?

When a person experiences hysteria,he/she has uncontrollable emotions and can be mad then happy and then sad which is what happened to Paul but it was different.

Answer 1

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When a person experiences hysteria, they can suffer from uncontrollable emotions. Sometimes they can be mad, then immediately happy! This happened to Paul, but was slightly different.

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Answer 2

When a person experiences hysteria, he/she has uncontrollable emotions. They can sometimes be mad then happy and then sad which is what happened to Paul but it was different.

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