Question

Is this sentence grammatically correct?

LGBT people have experienced many problems that jeopardize their short-term and long-term health, whether it be by social, economic, or medical standards.

Answer 1

LGBT people have experienced many problems that jeopardize their short-term and long-term health, be it by social, economic, or medical standards.

Answer 2

LGBT people have experienced many problems that jeopardize their short-term and long-term health, whether it be by social, economic, or medical standards.

The comma after economic isn't needed since you have said "or" and you wrote jeopardize it's actually jeopardise ( If your in the uk it applies to you) . Apart from that it's brilliant :)