Question

Read the paragraph. Franklin Delano Roosevelt (FDR) was born in Hyde Park, New York. He was the thirtieth-second president of the United States. He was the only president ever to be elected four times. FDR was the president during the Great Depression and World War II. He was the architect of the New Deal. The New Deal was a domestic program that provided economic relief and significant reforms in industry, finance, and housing. Which is the best way to improve this paragraph's sentence fluency?

Answer 1

on edge its A) Vary the sentence patterns

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Answer 2

Well for one, 'thirtieth-second' is not a word, it would be 'thirty-second.' You could also replace the period with a comma after the new deal and get rid of the second one. You could also say 'He was the only president to get elected four times, continuing his term through the great depression and world war II.'