Question

How do it sound, give me your full opinion. I'm writing a book.

First part : They all thought it was their imagination, but their eyes told otherwise. Across the bridge stood a pale, bleached little Girl. The three kids were in shock, so terrifying that their minds were telling them “run, run before it’s too late”

Answer 1

It sounds good so far. What person are you writing it in?

Answer 2

Wowww!!! is this the intro to the book? if it is this is soo good it sounds mysterious and Adventurous !! I lovee it!! Keep it up this is good I say go for it no matter what! This is so good :))

Step-by-step explanation:

I would read it! I like mysterious books.